What to Read
- Ten Simple Rules for Writing a Literature Review, Philip E. Bourne, 2013, https://dx.doi.org/10.1371%2Fjournal.pcbi.1003149
- High level tips for writing a literature review.
- How to Write a Literature Review Paper?, B. V. Wee and D. Banister, Transport Reviews, vol. 36, no. 2, pp. 278–288, Mar. 2016, doi: 10.1080/01441647.2015.1065456.
- You can take a class from Bert van Wee on this process.
- Engineering: The Literature Review Process https://libguides.asu.edu/engineeringlitreview/start
- A guide from Arizona State University on writing and engineering literature review.
- Writing a Scientific-Style Thesis: A Guide for Graduate Research Students, NUI Galway, Dr. Dermot Burns, 2017
- A comprehensive guide to writing a thesis.
Conciseness typically equates to clarity. Edit things down, keep removing until only the essential information is present.
When to use a figure
If you refer to a figure in the text, that figure should be nearby the text so that the reader can read your interpretation of the figure while looking at it.
All figures should be referenced and discussed in the text, i.e. don't just throw in a figure because you made and it looks nice.
Only insert a figure when it enhances the story you are telling in the text.
Students often create figures that are saved from figure creation software without any adjustments to the default settings. The default settings are never appropriate. Search the internet for how to make publication quality figures with your preferred software. For example here are some
- The figure is poorly scaled for actual paper sizes.
- Bitmap images have either too high or too low resolution. Make your resolutions 300 dpi (dot per inch).
- Font sizes are too small on axis labels and legends, for example.
- Grey backgrounds are left in the figure (common for Matlab).
- Readers cannot discern individual lines or dots in the plot. For example, you may have a time series line plot of an accelerometer over 30 minutes. Showing all 30 minutes is simply a blob of color that is not useful. Show only 1 minute or 30 seconds so that the reader can see the data in a useful context.
In general, you cannot include figures you did not create draw yourself in your document. If you want to include the figure there are essentially three options:
- Ask the copyright holder for written permission to use their figure.
- If the copyright holder has licensed their figure with a Creative Commons license (or similar) then you can use the figure if you abide by the license's rules. This usually means displaying the reference to the license and the authors.
- It may be possible to use the figure without permission if the use falls under an exception in your jurisdiction. Dutch Law seems to have exceptions for "Illustration for teaching or scientific research", "Quotation for criticism or review", and "Use for the purpose of research or private study". https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Copyright_law_of_the_Netherlands
Take time to typeset your math equations and number each equation for referencing in the text. Follow mathematical notation standards to make it easy for the readers.
Do not use \(a*b\) or \(a\times b\) to indicate scalar multiplication, \(ab\) is clear and more than sufficient.
This is how you do quotes in LaTeX!
`single quoted stuff' ``double quoted stuff''
Backticks on the left quotes are necessary to obtain correctly formatted quotation marks.
There is no reason to include long scripts and programs in your thesis. If a product of your thesis project is code, it is best to archive your code in the proper file formats to something like Zenodo or Figshare and then cite in your thesis. You can also upload an archive of the code to the TU Delft thesis repository. It is appropriate to include code if you want the reader to read it. For example you may demonstrate an algorithm by showing a short snippet of code.
Appendices are not just a clearing house to dump all the extra figures and tables you generated. Appendices are ancillary chapters and sections of your work. They provide supporting, but not necessary, information for the story in your main chapters. For example, if you say in a main chapter "We measured the stiffness of 10 bicycle tires and use those values in the model, see Appendix A." then appendix A should be a new section with written content that explains this measurement procedure and the results. If it was in the main text it would distract the reader from your main points, e.g. model description, but if the reader questions your stiffness values they can then read the appendix to see how you arrived at the values.
Referencing commerical equipment
I applied a 6 hz Butterworth low pass filter to the signal using the butter() function avaialble in Matlab 2019a (Natick, USA).
There are many writing styles; some styles fit with the norms in scientific writing and some do not. It is extremely important to make your academic reports and papers as easy to understand as possible. Some style choices will help you write more clearly.
Here are some recommendations:
- Write in active voice unless the context really needs passive voice to make things clearer.
- Write in present tense unless necessary to write in other tenses.
Allen Downey has some nice style notes: https://sites.google.com/site/allendowney/style-guide
Active Voice vs Passive Voice
You should write in active voice as your primary mode. Writing in active voice is generally simpler and clearer. Use passive voice sparingly. There should be a specific reason to use passive voice. Most major journals' style guides now request active voice. The Wikipedia article "English passive voice" is a good starting point to learn about the differences in active and passive and style recommendations. Allen Downey also has a couple quick reads that may help convince you of the merit of using active voice in scientific writing:
Initialisms and Acronyms
Don't use them. For every acronym or initialism you invent, it causes the reader to have to jump back to your definition every time they see it. The more you invent the more painful this is. There are two cases where it may be ok to use them: 1) the initialism or acronym is very commonly known to the expected audience, e.g. "PID" is an initialism that any control engineer would know, 2) you invent a single initialism or acronym for your paper due to repeating the phrase a very large number of times. Never use initialisms or acronyms in titles or abstracts. Always define any initialism or acronym (that your or others invented) on the first use of the phrase. If your sentences have more than one or two acronyms or initialisms present, you should likely write the phrases out to ease reading. Initialisms and acronyms make it easier for the writer but not the reader.